So, I just listened to the song....
Literally everything except for the chorus was trash sadly... The message was lacking and barely understundable.
Ye, you can do better then that. I get, that the point was to connect the man to something else then the current narative, but this won't do it.
It will still break some ice though.
@LukeAlmighty Extremely bad song except for the catchy hook.
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Do you mean the premise, or the first 5 seconds?
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Yeah, I called that part a chorus, since it was song by the crowd.
And I agree. That part was great, but the auto-tuned rant was just horrible. It took only 3 lines till he mentioned the matrix, and at that point, it was time to bash head to the table.
Kanye's "songs" has a lot of him just talking with a heavy autotune layer on it.