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my left joycon started to just vibrate if i push on the housing, and that disconnects it from the switch somehow. i think it is incorrectly reading that it is being slotted into the rail and vibrating because of it. so uhhh... yeah.... goodbye joycon.

@PonyPanda @coolboymew fair enough! i tend to write my music with a lot of syllables, didn't even really register until i had other musicians telling me that the vocal parts in my songs tend to be very rhythmic.

@PonyPanda @coolboymew i had a melody in mind but i can't exactly convey that over text lol. it's some emo shit lol.

@PonyPanda @coolboymew it's better to do near rhymes most of the time. it's good to have rhymes in the middle of lines as well, which is what eminem is really good at and why people like his flow so much. he's the most notable example, anyway. if you only rhyme the last word on each line and nothing else, especially if it the exact same word as a previous line, you sound cheesy/dumb.

here's an example of what that would look like in practice:

"baby, you make me feel so crazy
stuck in the daises, i'm spacing
all the things i held onto

lately, heartache is what i'm maintaining
all that i'm feigning, erase me
are you gonna' make me choose?"

you have three words that use long "A" and "E" sounds in the first line, then "daisy" rhymes with "crazy" but it's not at the end of the line, instead being another word with those long vowels that doesn't technically rhyme. the stanza ends on a word that doesn't rhyme with anything else to add a bit of pizzazz but it all comes back around when the formula is repeated.

@hawkguy lettuce has no nutritional value, otherwise I would use it instead. Spinach barely has a taste, especially when mixed with all this stuff. Just provides a vaguely green crunch.

Good suggestion on the tomatoes though. I'm allergic to them in their raw form though unfortunately :P that's why I use peppers instead.

@coolboymew I like both. I mainly can't stand people who just listen to music "for the beat" meanwhile the lyrics are offensively bad at worst or incredibly generic at best. A lot of mainstream stuff is like that. Just listen to instrumental stuff at that point lol.

@hawkguy wheat bread, sharp cheddar cheese, orange/yellow bell peppers, turkey, spinach. The beard special. Oh, and paper.

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