@graf apparently it tastes like dick from what I've heard
@Mr_NutterButter @matana something that might help you a lot is looking at critiques of video game stories, they usually go over stuff pretty in-depth. that, and d&d dungeon master videos. obviously you can skip the stuff that's more mechanics-based, but thinking of your characters as "players" in your story can help you get in their heads and think of what they might do.
when you're making characters too, before you even integrate them into the story, just write down what their appearance is like in detail, write about what they like and dislike, their hobbies, what job they have, what sort of prejudices they have, if they have a family, and a general backstory for them. the more you know your characters, the more you'll be able to make them feel real.
do the same thing with your world. you don't have to know EVERYTHING about it, but you should know far more than you'll ever explicitly tell the reader. you want to know what your characters know about the world, and what they don't know that they will find out.
it's best to start from the structure and bones of the world and the characters first before you start truly writing the story.
then after that you can make a rough draft, get down story beats and specific character building moments that you want to include. then flesh it out after that.
if you want advice on anything in particular feel free to ask :)
SGDQ 2022
Ah, correction, the artist wasn't just not calling the characters their "real pronouns" but also was... Modeling a single lewd image of an aged up underage character! And suggesting changes to the characters she was going to model! Gasp!
Seems like she has done work for SEGA in the past too, mainly Sonic comic stuff.
Hellsite link to their profile:
https://twitter.com/Rafaknight_rk
And the sauce for anyone that wants to see some mildly lewd Medli.
@hideki i know someone who was dating a girl and then their parents married each other and then they married each other. so they are both step siblings and husband/wife.
SGDQ 2022
oh hey that monkey ball clone that would have been so much more popular if they didn't start saying that every single character in the game was trans and like banning people in their discord for asking why it mattered and shit like that.
and the runner is using the only character in the game that's actually a girl xD like fuckin hell it's a monkey ball clone, it's a puzzle game... with hardly any story to speak of... why the fuck does character gender matter? fuckin losers.
i think there was something about an artist getting fired or something too because of that weird tranny shit? i can't remember exactly but it was stupid as hell.
abortion
@geotechland @notaleman I actually would prefer that abortion stay legal, I just don't like people who do it (except for very strenuous circumstances such as rape). I definitely agree that outlawing it just makes it more dangerous, much like drugs and guns.
SGDQ 2022
yooo we got the dude in the crowd with lights on strings just swinging them all over the place lol
i'm actually surprised how fast we're having shit happen xD
SGDQ 2022
realized i should probably add the CW lol for people that really don't want to hear anything about it.
we already got technical issues too, major lag over here. great stream so far :)
ooooh man even a cringe ukulele song about shadow of the colossus my day has been made. it even has vocal warmup sounds in the song itself!
you know my friend the other day told me that i'm the only one he enjoys listening to play the ukulele. not to toot my own horn but i concur.
@hideki @applejack @LukeAlmighty thank god i still got a few more years
@Riserise there are a few games i'm looking forward to, but usually the best ones are the really shitty games in the awful block or things like TASbot, randomizers, and other things like that which require a lot of explanation and get really technical.
こんにちは、私はひげさん。はじめまして!